Baaki tha ( Gazal )

This is my first ever ghazal, which i wrote in December 2016. The language that i have used is Urdu.

I am not a pure poet, I am still learning things, and learning myself. Would love to have your feedback.

 Title: Baaki Tha

Baaki tha.

Mujh mai bs jo bhi tha

Wohi ab baaki tha

Zindagi thi aur mai tha

Bs tera Humsafar ban'na baaki tha

Ghr jalta rha taufanoon mai bhi

Bs tera puchna baaki tha.

Kuch yun shuru hui dastaan meri,

Aur phr bs bicharna baaki tha.

Alfaaz ka thora kacha tha, 

Par pyaar ka mai sacha tha,

Kul Kainat sy uper chaha tha tujhko,

Bus Kufr ka ilzaam baaki tha.

Izat ki baat karty ho..

Humnay to apny ap ko bech diya tumhari khushi khaatir.

Bs tera tawaif kehna baaki tha.

Tera yai kehna har waqt k zalim hai "ahmed",

Magar ashk boht tha us waqt,

Tera ankhoon mai dekhna baaki tha

Mujh mai joo bhi tha,

Wohi bs baaki tha.

Zindagi thi, Mai tha

Bs tera humsafar ban'na baaki tha.

Ghr jalta rha taufanoon mai bhi,

Bus tera puchna baaki tha.